ICE

by Tiffany
(Utah)

Ice - A short Romance Story by Tiffany

Ice - A short Romance Story by Tiffany

Ice - A short Romance Story by Tiffany

We walked slowly hand in hand together as it was the first time I had ever been on a date, especially with a guy who was as amazing as he was. He was pale and deeply beauitful with lite freckles and deep set dimples. He was the image of perfection, and his smile seemed to say it all. I had known this odd boy for all of sixteen years and never once did either one of us have the heart to share our feeling with one another, and although we shared the good and the bad. And the sad and the embarrssing, we would have possibly went our whole lives without knowing who truely loved who.


I couldn't forget the day we bumped noses and one thing to another and his soft, cracked lips touched mine slightly until it turned to a complete kiss. My core had seemed to all but melt, leaving my spine with hardly anything to support, my heart seemed to burn with an intense heat and my muscles turned to goo. I knew at that point the confusing feeling I had felt my whole life, was excalty what I wanted....what I had been looking for...

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Dec 13, 2011
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Not bad. When to use punctuation needs to be mastered. Thought and descriptions of feelings were kind of left hanging.

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